Here at Woodpecker, we always emphasize the quality of the cold email that you send to prospects.
With all the effort you put into identifying possible leads, putting your contact list together and organizing your outreach campaign, it only makes sense that you send the most persuasive, effective content in your email.
Cold email templates can help you get better results from your campaigns, and using them means saving time and launching campaigns more quickly. But you need to use them wisely.
Let’s look at what cold email templates are, what they can do for your outreach campaigns and some examples that will show how you can customize them in many different ways – so they work in your favor.
What is a cold email template?
A cold email template is a ready-made, pre-designed framework that provides the broad outlines and general form of your message. It contains certain parts that can be customized for the recipient and create the impression of one-on-one messaging even though it is done at scale.
Cold email templates are basically emails that you’ve already sent that can be updated and adjusted for sending in new campaigns.
While other email templates are designed for a huge range of occasions and contexts — thank-you messages, fundraising campaigns, invitations, surveys, etc. — cold email templates are focused on starting a conversation with sales prospects.
Benefits of using cold email templates
Now, let’s take a look at the key benefits of using the best cold email templates.
They save time & make your work more efficient
Let’s start with perhaps the most obvious reason to use cold email templates — you don’t need to reinvent the wheel every time you start a new campaign. With email templates, after you formulate the general outline and focus of the message, you can use it over and over with small changes as needed.
Of course, this assumes you’re using the best version of your cold email, which you can achieve through testing (something you should always do).
When you have an effective cold email template with a solid record of deepening engagement with the prospect, you can reuse it in future campaigns instead of starting from scratch.
Use the time you save thanks to cold email templates to test new variations or think of new, creative approaches to your next campaign.
They are (usually) better than starting from scratch
Using cold emails doesn’t mean that you can recycle the same content again and again forever without occasionally coming up with a fresh idea. It’s always good to add to your template library when possible or needed.
However, the advantage of using templates goes beyond time-saving. Remember that you save them because they work. When templates get used over and over, you get a chance to track their effectiveness, test different versions and make small changes based on feedback.
In other words, your templates have a track history of getting results. That text you just wrote a few minutes ago? Not so much.
Stick with what works while slowly introducing new material into your template library. Don’t risk losing a potential sales lead by rushing content that’s not ready or tested.
Easier personalization
Last but certainly not least, cold email templates make personalization at scale easy. A good template has plenty of snippets, or points where different words, names or phrases can be used to make the message sound like it was written with just the recipient in mind. Use those snippets correctly and the message definitely does not sound like one of many emails that are essentially the same.
It’s the very definition of irony — the best way to reach a large audience is also the best way to create messages that sound like they were written individually to everyone on your list. But let’s leave that for others to discuss while we move on to some great examples of cold email templates.
Maintain a consistent brand voice
There are lots of different “angles” your cold email templates can take and each of them can be part of a funnel that consists of multiple messages. You could potentially need dozens of messages for different situations and positions in a funnel.
This means it’s easy to lose control of the form, content and tone of your messaging, especially if multiple people are contributing texts for cold email campaigns.
With a library of templates, it’s easier to build consistency in your messaging, giving all messages a similar feel and making it clear that they are all part of the same overall brand identity.
Using cold email templates safely
Before we look at some examples of cold emails, let us share a reminder that there is a right way and a wrong way to use them and the wrong way can cause serious problems for you.
The right way to use them is by using them as a starting point, a framework. Think of the template as comprising most of your message but still missing important parts that personalize it for the recipient. There will always be certain elements that need to be changed for everyone who will receive your message — things like names, companies, positions and other bits that speak directly to the circumstances, challenges and needs of the prospect.
The wrong way to use cold email templates is to simply copy & paste them over and over and send them as a finished, complete message. This is a terrible idea for two major reasons.
First, using the copy-paste method means you’re not personalizing your message, which deprives your campaigns of one of the most powerful tools you have for getting a response from the prospect. Copy-pasting the same message over and over is the last thing you want to do in cold emailing.
Secondly, if you’re just copy-pasting the same message into all of your emails, it’s very likely that someone somewhere is doing the same thing with the same template. Powerful spam filters used by email service providers can detect large amounts of the same (or essentially the same) message being sent out and flag it as spam.
Once you are identified as a source of spam by email service providers, it is extremely difficult to get your sender reputation back and much of the work you put into your campaigns will be wasted because no one is likely to see your messages.
On the other hand, all you have to do to avoid these problems is personalize your templates as much as you can with all the information you have about the recipient.
Examples of cold email templates
Now let’s look at some examples of different kinds of cold email outreach, a brief examination of what makes them effective and what a follow-up mail might look like.
The 4T format
This effective template arrangement from cold email expert Josh Braun uses four “T’s” to set up the issue, inspire action and spark a conversation:
- Truth sentences. A pure statement of fact, usually about a potential threat or an actual challenge coming up, like “Black Friday is almost here”, “Costs are rising everywhere”, “Finding new talent has never been so hard”, etc.
- Think sentences. Get the prospect to consider how or if they are preparing to deal with this challenge — “What are you doing to get ready…”, “Is your current staff large enough to…”, “Are you exposed to too much risk…”, etc.
- Third-party validation. Essentially the same idea as social proof, this is where you mention that another company is using your solutions and getting great results — “X is setting new sales records with our…”, “After just two months of working together, X is already…”, etc.
- Talk sentences. An invitation to keep the discussion going with a phone call, online meeting, etc. — “Want to know how they’re doing this?”, “Worth considering for {{COMPANY}}?”, “Have 5 minutes to learn more?”
Put together, it all might look something like this:
Hi {{FIRST_NAME}}, I heard through the grapevine that your catering company is almost always late. What do your employees think about having lunch an hour later than they would like to? I’m guessing that it disrupts their day a bit. Also, when you’re hungry, you’re not working at your best, are you? This is where we can help – with healthy, personalized catering as part of your employee benefits program, delivered on time, every day. We already deliver to three other companies in your building and they love us — I can put you in touch if you want to hear everything straight from them. Can I send a menu over so you can at least think about what you might have for lunch tomorrow?
What makes it good
- Follows the 4T formula
- Aware of a problem that needs to be solved sooner than later
- Definitely a sales pitch but feels like an offer of help
- Easy closing invite to move conversation forward
Follow-up email example:
Hi {{FIRST_NAME}}, I just came out of the kitchen and today’s lunchtime menu is amazing! There’s still time to have it delivered to {{COMPANY}} tomorrow (sorry, already planned for today) if you want. Remember, when your staff has a healthy, great meal delivered on time for the lunch break they have planned, everybody’s better off during the second half of the day. How about a two-week trial so you can see the difference between what you have now and what you could put on the table every day?
Share expert knowledge
A common sales strategy is to depend on your reputation as a thought leader and problem solver. You might reach out like this:
Hi {{FIRST_NAME}}, I know from experience that {{PROBLEM}} is an issue for most companies in {{INDUSTRY}} today. If you’re dealing with {{INDUSTRY}}, I know just how you feel. I’ve been working with organizations to solve this problem for 6 years. As a {{YOUR_ROLE}} at {{YOUR_COMPANY}}, I’ve seen this problem from the inside and I have learned how to solve it. I recently published a free guide that walks you through some of the best ways to solve {{PROBLEM}}. You can download it here. If I can help out with any questions you might have, don’t hesitate to ask.
What makes it good
- Right to the point, sending knows that the recipient is in a relevant industry
- The challenge/problem we’re talking about is clear
- Offer of help
- Offer of follow-up support
Follow-up email example:
Hi {{FIRST_NAME}}, Just wanted to let you know that my guide to solving {{PROBLEM}} is still available. All my advice there is based on my 6 years of experience getting to know the solution to this problem from every angle. Don’t let {{PROBLEM}} get even worse! You can download my guide and start learning how to turn things around. And remember, my virtual door is always open so don’t hesitate to ping me if you would like to talk.
The Before-After-Bridge format
Here’s one you can probably guess from its name. It simply contrasts the before and after of a certain situation and closes with the solution (bridge) that made it possible. Simple but effective, it draws a picture for the prospect of what their life could be like with your help.
Hi {{FIRST_NAME}}, I’m writing to let you know that I just checked the domain authority score for your website and the results aren’t good. With higher domain authority, you would be found more easily and rank higher in Google search terms results. That means a lot more traffic for your site, more page views, leads and conversions. I’ll just say it – in online retail, it’s like you’re not even there if customers can’t find you. But we can help. We’ve improved the domain authority scores for hundreds of ecommerce operations through a combination of website optimization, content marketing and other methods. With our help, you can gain the visibility you need to get attention in a crowded online market. Is this worth a call to discuss?
What makes it good
- Starts with a reference to a common problem, including a problem that you know the prospect has
- Explains what prospect is losing by living with this problem
- Shows how much better things could be
- Offers the solution
Follow-up email example:
Hi {{FIRST_NAME}}, Just a reminder that customers can’t buy from a company they can’t find! Every day your domain authority remains low is a day that your online visibility suffers. You could be driving a lot more traffic to your site if you could just make a few changes that would boost your domain authority in a matter of a few weeks. Do you think you could find a few minutes to learn how easy it is to get started?
Offering recruiting services
This is an increasingly common type of B2B service given the staff shortages and hyper-competitive nature of the business. Still, staffing is a mission-critical challenge for many employers and a major pain point, which means opportunity for those who can craft a persuasive message.
Hi {{FIRST_NAME}}, I may be off base, but I’m guessing that finding the right people to join the {{COMPANY}} team is one of your biggest problems right now. How would I know that? I’ve worked with other companies in {{INDUSTRY}} to solve their staffing challenges and I know it’s something that nearly everyone is dealing with. The competition for the best candidates is intense and if you can find just fifteen minutes for me, I can show you how {{COMPANY}} can gain an edge. Is ensuring your ability to grow and be successful worth a short chat?
What makes it good
- Bold subject line gets attention
- To the point, focused
- Same format can be used for similar problems with just small changes
Follow-up example:
Hi {{FIRST_NAME}}, Still have open positions on your staff that you can’t fill? If so, we’re on stand-by to help {{COMPANY}} attract the best candidates and move your business forward. All it takes is a short chat to get started. Worth discussing soon?
The AIDA Format
Like the 4T format above, this is a formulaic approach to composing cold emails. It consists of four parts – Attention, Interest, Desire and Action.
- Attention (sometimes Awareness). Hey! Over here! Look at this! That’s how things have to start, right? In the context of an email, this part is typically assigned to the Subject Line so it’s visible at the Inbox level.
- Interest. What you’re offering and why it should be of interest to the prospect. In other words, you’re answering the question Why should you care about this?
- Desire. You definitely want this, right? More sales, higher traffic, better conversions – whatever the metric is, it’s now within your reach!
- Action. All you have to do is click here and we’ll take care of the rest. Now is the time!
Here’s what your AIDA cold email might look like:
Hi {{NAME}}, Tracking invoices is no one’s idea of a good time – but you need to handle it when running a business. Every accountant will tell you that it’s easily the most time-consuming part of their job when it’s time to complete monthly reports. Just think of the extra hours of work and the potential for costly errors. How much extra is {{COMPANY}} spending just to process this mountain of paperwork every month? With an automated tool based on simple scanning, you could slash the amount of time needed to keep your books in good order. Savings, better accuracy and digitized records — what’s not to like? That’s what we’re offering for free for one week. Try it to see how much better workflows at {{COMPANY}} get. There’s no risk, but potentially a huge reward when you see how much you can save. Is this worth a few minutes of your time to learn more?
What makes it good
- There is a sense of urgency throughout, moving the prospect to act
- The offer is presented as something too good to miss (FOMO)
Follow-up example:
Hi {{FIRST_NAME}}, How’s the pile of invoices at {{COMPANY}} going? Remember, a fully automated solution is waiting for you to try. Just set up your account, quickly scan documents into our system and let us take care of the rest. Fully complete, accurate accounting statements with minimum time spent processing invoices — that’s what you’ll get for free for a full week. Can you find a small window in your schedule to discuss?
Looking for partners
After B2B sales, this is another very common reason for cold outreach. The key here is to share as much as needed to gain interest but not so much that you make it too long and have nothing left for your follow-up or the conversation you hope to have.
Hi {{FIRST_NAME}}, I discovered your profile in {{SOURCE}} and thought we could connect to discuss partnership opportunities based on {{REASON}}. We’ve successfully worked with a number of brands in the recent past, including {{PARTNER_1}}, {{PARTNER_2}} and {{PARTNER_3}} to name a few. We’re looking to expand our network of partners in this segment, and I thought we could have a short chat to see if we’re on the same page regarding where you are and what you’re looking for. Is this something you’d be interested in?
What makes it good
- Again, short and to the point. You could add more info about who you are and what you do, but you risk making the email too long
- Makes the case with the use of recent successes – even better if you can mention something that they can see if they Google it (because they will Google it)
- The {{REASON}} for cooperation leaves room to reference something personal about the recipient
Follow-up example:
Hi {{FIRST_NAME}}, After the cross-promotional campaign we did with {{PARTNER_1}}, they got {{BENEFIT}}. Partnering with us can open a lot of doors. I’d need just a few minutes to describe what {{COMPANY}} has to gain through a partnership with us. Is it worth discussing?
Offering services in a particular marketing channel
If you’re a marketing agency with special know-how in digital marketing channels that some brands may struggle with, there’s an opening for you. You might reach out like this:
Hi {{FIRST_NAME}}, Quick question — do you think {{COMPANY}} could get more leads and sales if you had a stronger {{CHANNEL}} presence? I already know the answer. Of course you would. I know this because developing your activities on {{CHANNEL}} is exactly what we do here at Company X. With our insider knowledge of the platform and proven methods that drove sales for brands like {{CLIENT}}, we can do the same for {{COMPANY}}. If you can find ten minutes for me, I’ll take you through everything we could do to help you reach your sales potential with the help of {{CHANNEL}}. I’ll leave a link to my calendar and invite you to book any time that works for you. If I can answer any questions for you now, just reply and I will get right back to you. Looking forward to it!
What makes it good
- Start with a question to mix things up in your messaging – don’t rely on the “Hi, my name is X and I…” formula too much.
- Clear value proposition — “This is what we do, it has worked with x,y and z and we can do it for you too”
- Very direct sales proposition without feeling too salesy
Follow-up example:
Hi {{FIRST_NAME}}, In my previous email I mentioned that my agency has used {{CHANNEL}} to produce great results for brands like {{CLIENT}}. This time, I want to give you some numbers that will show just what kind of results I mean. How about a {{SALES_NUMBER}}% increase in sales in six months? Or maybe {{LEADS_NUMBER}} more leads than you ever had in one quarter? Or, if you count success in website traffic, a {{WEBSITE_NUMBER}}% jump in {{TIME_FRAME}}? These are the kinds of results we have delivered and we have a plan to do the same for {{COMPANY}}. I’m ready to share the details at any time that’s good for you. My calendar is here if you want to set up a chat – or just reply to this email and let me know.
Offering B2B services
Companies need all kinds of services provided by other companies. From servicing computer networks to keeping the office clean to selling pens & paper, the list is truly endless. Let’s take the example of offering logistics support such as warehouse or yard management solutions for an ecommerce company for an example of what your outreach might look like:
Hi {{FIRST_NAME}}, Usually, ecommerce customers are quick to switch to another company if you don’t meet their expectations. One of which is fast delivery times. All the work you put into optimizing your website, your product offering and more can be ruined if your fulfillment logistics aren’t fast and efficient. That’s where we can help. With our modern warehousing, digital shipping processes and location close to transport hubs, we can guarantee two-day delivery as standard. Offering that – and at the lowest possible prices – is what today’s consumers expect. Can I have ten minutes to explain more? Just reply to this email and I will take care of the rest.
What makes it good
- The threat-solution formula gets attention and puts your value proposition into focus.
- FOMO (Fear of Missing Out) is also effective when pitching B2B services — “If you don’t deliver this to your customers, someone else will”.
- In this example, you know that logistics support is always a concern for online businesses so you can afford to be a bit more aggressive and ask for more (“ten minutes!”) in your first cold email.
Follow-up example:
Hi {{FIRST_NAME}}, My offer to explain how we can significantly upgrade your logistics still stands! Remember that you could be paying way too much for every order you send. Maybe we could just send you a price estimate based on your answers to a few questions so you can see just how much savings we’re talking about? Let me know if we take that step.
The PAS Model
Another formulaic approach, the PAS (Problem (sometimes Pain) – Agitation – Solution) Model frames your message in three important parts. It’s all about a pain point, how much that pain point really hurts and the solution that brings relief. We all want relief from pain, right?
- Problem. Every business has a problem or a pain point that interrupts their operations, makes them spend too much, lowers productivity, etc.
- Agitation. The problem hurts so much because it results in A, B and C. How can you get out of this mess?
- Solution. Yes, there IS a way out! All you have to do is click here to find out more! Oh, sweet relief…
Follow-up example:
Hi {{FIRST_NAME}}, When you say “Team integration activity”, are your employees happy or do they suddenly start remembering that they all have a dentist appointment on that day? Too many employees see these events as a waste of time, boring or worse. This is unfortunate because studies repeatedly show that teams that are well integrated are more productive, have lower turnover, fewer absences and overall better results. So how are you dealing with less productivity, higher turnover, more absences and inferior results? At InteGREATion, we’re experts at planning and hosting the perfect event for your team. We’ve organized more than 1,000 such corporate team-building exercises and our reviews speak for themselves. Would you be opposed to a short chat about exactly what we can offer?
What makes it good
- Starts with a relevant, relatable problem that every company deals with
- Contrasts “Here’s what you should get” with “Here’s what you usually get”
- Presents a simple solution to the problem
Hi {{FIRST_NAME}}, Started thinking about your next team integration event yet? We can work with you to create the perfect mix of fun, productive and even educational events. Can we send over a list of custom events we can set up for you?
Using cold email templates in Woodpecker
Woodpecker now allows you to create, store, customize and reuse your own templates in your cold email campaigns. This new feature makes your cold email outreach quicker and more efficient. Among other things, you can:
- Tag templates to make them easy to find for future campaigns
- Use snippets to personalize every email
- Share templates between different users
- Create templates from existing emails
- Edit, delete or disable templates as needed
To create your own template library in your Woodpecker account, just go to the Templates tab:
Want to test it? Go here.
Use ours, create your own, see what works
As you can see, there is a rich variety of templates to use with your cold email outreach. Use them to save time and get better results in your future campaigns.
Remember that a template is a framework, a general outline of what your message should be. There is still lots of room for creativity and putting your own personal stamp on your communications. It’s important to experiment, borrowing inspiration from different sources, to what works for your prospects.
When you find something that works, save it to your library, but keep testing and refining it for even better results!
How can I create an effective cold sales email template?
To create an effective cold sales email template, start with a compelling subject line that grabs attention. The opening line should be personalized, using the recipient’s first name, and quickly address a pain point relevant to the prospect’s company. Include a brief call to action, like suggesting a quick call to discuss further.
What are some key elements to include in a B2B cold sales email?
Key elements of a B2B cold sales email include addressing the appropriate person or decision maker, clearly stating your value proposition, and relating it to specific pain points or industry news relevant to the prospect’s company. A clear and concise subject line and a personalized greeting like “Hi [First Name]” are also crucial.
How can I ensure my cold email campaign targets the right person in a company?
To ensure your cold email campaign targets the right person, research the prospect company to identify the decision maker or the most appropriate person for your message. LinkedIn and company websites are useful resources for this. Tailoring the email to address their specific role or challenges can increase the chances of a positive response.
What makes a subject line compelling in cold sales email templates?
A compelling subject line in cold sales email templates should be concise, personalized, and create curiosity or urgency. It could reference a mutual connection, a recent blog post or guest post by the recipient, or specific industry news that resonates with the recipient’s interests or needs.
Can you suggest a few ideas for opening lines in cold sales emails?
A few ideas for opening lines in cold sales emails include addressing a recent achievement of the prospect’s company, mentioning a mutual connection, or referencing a relevant industry trend. Starting with something like, “I noticed your company recently…” can immediately make the email more relevant and engaging.
How important is social proof in cold sales email strategies?
Social proof is very important in cold sales email strategies as it helps build credibility and trust. Including brief mentions of how your product or service has helped similar companies or citing endorsements from industry leaders can significantly increase the likelihood of a positive response.
What role do follow-up emails play in a cold email strategy?
Follow-up emails are crucial in a cold email strategy as they increase the chances of your email being noticed and responded to. They should be sent if there is no response to the initial email, reminding the recipient of your previous message and reinforcing the value proposition.
How can sales reps use cold outreach email templates effectively?
Sales reps can use cold outreach email templates effectively by customizing them to each prospect. This includes personalizing the subject line and opening line, and tailoring the content to address the specific pain points and needs of the prospect. The template should serve as a starting point, not a one-size-fits-all solution.
What are some tips for crafting the perfect subject line for cold sales emails?
For crafting the perfect subject line for cold sales emails, keep it short and to the point, make it relevant to the recipient, and try to evoke curiosity or highlight a benefit. Using phrases like “Quick question about [Prospect’s Company]” or “Ideas for [addressing a specific pain point]” can be effective.
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